Rebecca (meshiach) wrote in a_pollinator,
Rebecca
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a_pollinator


So Plain, So Simple, So Lame

I saw you sitting there
I found it hard to believe
You could ever be important to me
Someone
So plain
So simple
So lame

You stared at me
I stared at you
And part of me died from your gaze
It was all
So plain
So simple
So lame

I forgot about you
As you left with her
Then you called me in the dead of the night
Still
So plain
So simple
So lame

We loved for a while
Just you and me
As the world looked on with a from
The two of us
So plain
So simple
So lame

Then it all changed
I hated you then
As you held me down to the ground
For reasons
So plain
So simple
So lame

I kept loving you still
Your touches, Your smiles
I took you back time and again
Love is
So plain
So simple
So lame

You went away
But your memory remained
I tried to remember
You are
So plain
So simple
So lame

You told me you changed
I believed time and again
I guess I'm so
So plain
So simple
So lame

This is just the first draft but I really like it anyway. I purposefully wrote it without chorus in an attempt to get away from the normal song structure of V1, C, V2, C, B, V3, C.
Update: I didn't like the way the song was going, I was really pissed off when I wrote it. I like it a little better now, not a lot better, but some...
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